The Broken (Lyrical Rewrite)

Subject: The Broken (Lyrical Rewrite) Fri Dec 21, 2007 5:00 am

I see you smiling and laughing with me.
And I feel so alive and real, Because of you.

But then I wake up and find that it's just a dream.
My Angel had become a Devil and now we're through.

Chorus: I cried my blood onto my broken heart. Just to try and fill it up again.
You tore me from your once warm arms. And now I am this dark and lonely sin.
I cried my blood onto my broken heart. Just to keep the pain from taking me.
You've made me into The Broken Lover scarred, Scarred by the memory of you and me.

Why did it have to come to this end of happiness?
When did you turn against me and try to break my heart?

You used to be the one to fill my emptyness.
And now your out to break me, kill me. You mean me harm.

(Chorus)

What happened to you to make you want to do what you did to me?
How can you just cast aside all the time and the love that I held for you?
You've broken me...
And now we're though!

(Chorus Fade-Out)

Subject: Re: The Broken (Lyrical Rewrite) Fri Jul 24, 2009 11:37 am

Wow so very deep and dark
the scars we all wear weather hidden or seem
Roses to you
blooming

Teresa

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