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PostSubject: If I Knew   If I Knew Icon_minitimeSat Aug 04, 2007 11:20 pm



If I Knew 324
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that I had a few minutes left to live
I would spend them with you
whispering I love you; in your ear
wrapped in your arms
sharing kisses until my final breath
wiping the tears from your eyes
while I caress your face
and then I would wait for you at heaven's gate
for I shall love you always; until the end of time
forever more... mi amour


If I Knew Ty12fi6

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PostSubject: Re: If I Knew   If I Knew Icon_minitimeFri Aug 10, 2007 6:20 pm

flower IFF eye could wait at heavens gate for love

.... this is a wonderful poem
full of grace and thoughts of someones love

determined to make even sadness depart from hearts
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PostSubject: Re: If I Knew   If I Knew Icon_minitimeFri Aug 10, 2007 11:11 pm

CharlaX wrote:
flower IFF eye could wait at heavens gate for love

.... this is a wonderful poem
full of grace and thoughts of someones love

determined to make even sadness depart from hearts

Thank you Charlax
May you find the joy that you seek to fullfil you life.
Love and Light
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PostSubject: Re: If I Knew   If I Knew Icon_minitimeMon Aug 13, 2007 11:44 am

This is sad but also yet very lovely. Beautifully written.. Awesome write
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PostSubject: Re: If I Knew   If I Knew Icon_minitimeFri Aug 17, 2007 1:09 am

Chickadeegirl wrote:
This is sad but also yet very lovely. Beautifully written.. Awesome write

Thanks Barb
yes sad but shows love too.
Roses to you



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PostSubject: Re: If I Knew   If I Knew Icon_minitimeSun Aug 26, 2007 3:00 pm

a beautiful and heart tugging write creating a lovely image made me smile

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PostSubject: Re: If I Knew   If I Knew Icon_minitimeSun Aug 26, 2007 3:53 pm

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If I Knew 324
If I Knew Label_18
that I had a few minutes left to live
I would spend them with you
whispering I love you; in your ear
wrapped in your arms
sharing kisses until my final breathe
wiping the tears from your eyes
while I caress your face
and then I would wait for you at heaven's gate
for I shall love you always; until the end of time
forever more... mi amour


If I Knew Ty12fi6

by Tears of Roses
eye fixed this INTRO with a banner


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PostSubject: Re: If I Knew   If I Knew Icon_minitimeTue Aug 28, 2007 9:31 pm

Teresa,
you have written a beautiful poem!

I LOVE the picture that you have going
along with it.

only thing I would fix is this..

sharing kisses until my final breathe

change breathe to breath...

very well done!!!

Summer:cheers:
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PostSubject: Re: If I Knew   If I Knew Icon_minitimeMon Dec 16, 2013 12:35 am

I like this very much. Really descriptive words.
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