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PostSubject: If I Were   If I Were Icon_minitimeSun Aug 26, 2007 3:08 pm

If I Were

If I were a hero, what would I be
A knight in shining armour, to come and rescue thee
Slay the dragon and slay the beast
Free the land, to say the least

If I were a hero, what would I be
A masked crusader, to set poor people free
Give them a life, not poverty ridden
Then they would think, they were in heaven

If I were a hero, what would I be
A wonder man, to make evil flee
To weed it all out, make the world clean
Make it all happy, not vile and obscene

But I'm not a hero, just a bloke with a pen
I can't change anything, not now or then
Still I will scribble, the way that I do
And maybe one day, have some influence too

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PostSubject: Re: If I Were   If I Were Icon_minitimeSat Jun 04, 2011 11:46 pm

I love how you make so many think with this one it says a lot to me.
Roses to you James
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PostSubject: Re: If I Were   If I Were Icon_minitimeThu Dec 12, 2013 5:48 pm

Acridrain wrote:

But I'm not a hero, just a bloke with a pen
I can't change anything, not now or then
Still I will scribble, the way that I do
And maybe one day, have some influence too

This is a very well versed poem and the last verse really tells us everything.
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