lanaia74
Number of posts : 99 Age : 966 Location : North Carolina, USA Points : 0 Registration date : 2007-09-07
| Subject: In the End Sun Oct 21, 2007 8:03 am | |
| How on earth could you do such a thing to me? I never harmed you in any kind of way When you were hurting me, you didn't give me any time to flee I loved you so, from you I would have never strayed. But in our life together, you didn't give me much of a choice You always making the decision, as to what path we would take It's like at times, when I tried to talk, you never heard my voice I had no idea the price to be with you, such a price, I had to make. In a way, all the time we were together, in a way you always intimidated me You never ever taking the time to hear me You always keeping a tight grip on me, making sure I would that I could never flee It's like in a way, you never really took the time to see me. I really have no idea, as to why you are that way At first our life together was so very good I was always there for you, no questions asked, and without delay Always supporting you, standing by your side, as I should. But after a while, things between us started to change You started being so controlling and over bearing I knew your action was odd, but the longer the time, you started seeming so very strange Even to the place, when you talked to me, usually you would end swearing. In the end, you made my life a living hell I felt as if I couldn't breathe, like you were smothering me The our relationship and our love, started to fail In the end, as you killed me, it wasn't surprising as I begged for my life, you never heard my plea. | |
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Number of posts : 472 Age : 67 Location : Dream Land Job/hobbies : Reading, Poetry, Crafts, Art, Roses Points : 163 Registration date : 2007-07-30
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| Subject: Re: In the End Sat Nov 03, 2007 11:02 pm | |
| Wonderful piece Lanaia I would of added more hurt and fear in the end. It would make it more believable. Roses to you Teresa | |
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