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PostSubject: If I Knew   Sat Aug 04, 2007 11:20 pm





that I had a few minutes left to live
I would spend them with you
whispering I love you; in your ear
wrapped in your arms
sharing kisses until my final breath
wiping the tears from your eyes
while I caress your face
and then I would wait for you at heaven's gate
for I shall love you always; until the end of time
forever more... mi amour




by Tears of Roses

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PostSubject: Re: If I Knew   Fri Aug 10, 2007 6:20 pm

flower IFF eye could wait at heavens gate for love

.... this is a wonderful poem
full of grace and thoughts of someones love

determined to make even sadness depart from hearts
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PostSubject: Re: If I Knew   Fri Aug 10, 2007 11:11 pm

CharlaX wrote:
flower IFF eye could wait at heavens gate for love

.... this is a wonderful poem
full of grace and thoughts of someones love

determined to make even sadness depart from hearts

Thank you Charlax
May you find the joy that you seek to fullfil you life.
Love and Light

Teresa

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PostSubject: Re: If I Knew   Mon Aug 13, 2007 11:44 am

This is sad but also yet very lovely. Beautifully written.. Awesome write
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PostSubject: Re: If I Knew   Fri Aug 17, 2007 1:09 am

Chickadeegirl wrote:
This is sad but also yet very lovely. Beautifully written.. Awesome write

Thanks Barb
yes sad but shows love too.
Roses to you





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PostSubject: Re: If I Knew   Sun Aug 26, 2007 3:00 pm

a beautiful and heart tugging write creating a lovely image made me smile

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PostSubject: Re: If I Knew   Sun Aug 26, 2007 3:53 pm

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that I had a few minutes left to live
I would spend them with you
whispering I love you; in your ear
wrapped in your arms
sharing kisses until my final breathe
wiping the tears from your eyes
while I caress your face
and then I would wait for you at heaven's gate
for I shall love you always; until the end of time
forever more... mi amour




by Tears of Roses
eye fixed this INTRO with a banner


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PostSubject: Re: If I Knew   Tue Aug 28, 2007 9:31 pm

Teresa,
you have written a beautiful poem!

I LOVE the picture that you have going
along with it.

only thing I would fix is this..

sharing kisses until my final breathe

change breathe to breath...

very well done!!!

Summer:cheers:
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PostSubject: Re: If I Knew   Mon Dec 16, 2013 12:35 am

I like this very much. Really descriptive words.
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