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PostSubject: Our Dark Oath (Poetic Version)   Our Dark Oath (Poetic Version) Icon_minitimeFri Aug 31, 2007 12:18 am

We are two angels in love,
Though we are not allowed.
We are doomed to fall from above,
Because this love goes against our vows.

We've been caught kissing,
And now our lord is shouting.
He says we will not be missed,
And he sends us away, pouting.

We were only sharing our hearts,
And now our wings are stripped from us.
We become mortals broken apart,
And cast down onto the world of rust.

Don't worry, love. I will find you,
And we will continue to hold our hands.
We will live in our mortal truth,
That even death can't kill our love so grand.

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Notes: I rewrote my origional Haiku version into this for a contest in a different poetry site. I thought it'd be a great addition on this site too.
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PostSubject: Re: Our Dark Oath (Poetic Version)   Our Dark Oath (Poetic Version) Icon_minitimeFri Aug 31, 2007 1:22 am

Love something we all cherish
Wonderful power packed
Roses to you
blooming
Teresa

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PostSubject: Re: Our Dark Oath (Poetic Version)   Our Dark Oath (Poetic Version) Icon_minitimeThu Sep 06, 2007 12:12 pm

Wonderful write. Well expressed indeed.
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