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PostSubject: Like Romeo and Juliet   Like Romeo and Juliet Icon_minitimeWed Aug 29, 2007 1:07 am

I heard the news, It can't be true.
You can't be dying while I still remain.
I rush to see you. I arrive into view.
I see you laying on the ground in pain.

I kneel down beside you. You smile I do.
You say with a kind voice that you love me.
I cry as I too, say that I love you.
You pull me into a kiss for all to see.

I taste your lips so fine. I feel their touch so devine.
Then I feel what I feared the most.
Your heart has died. I see the death in your eyes.
I feel that you have become a ghost.

Our bliss gone and lost. I vow to join you at all cost.
I return home and await the midnight hour.
I cried and I sobbed. I didn't eat because of my loss.
I walked out the door and to the yard of flowers.

I smiled as I saw so far, all the white roses of the yard.
I placed the gun to my head and ended my life.
Death had torn us apart. But now it reunites our hearts.
The yard now has red roses among the roses of white.
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PostSubject: Re: Like Romeo and Juliet   Like Romeo and Juliet Icon_minitimeWed Aug 29, 2007 1:48 am

Dang,
this was ripe with emotions.
My favorite line out of this whole
poem was this:

Our bliss gone and lost. I vow to join you at all cost.

So well written!

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PostSubject: Re: Like Romeo and Juliet   Like Romeo and Juliet Icon_minitimeFri Aug 31, 2007 12:10 am

Wow Ripe with Emotion
So strong you can cut it with a knife.

Roses to you

:blooming:
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