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PostSubject: Hearts of Steel   Wed Aug 29, 2007 11:41 pm



Here sits a broken man, a broken beaten man.
Who's down on his luck, And feelin' kinda stuck.
But no-body helps him.

Here sits a lonely man, a fearful lonely man.
Who's running out of love, And feelin' out of luck.
But no-body loves him.

Chorus: No-body will ever know what it's like.
No-body will ever know how it feels.
He walks among us as the shadow in the night.
Carrying all the sins of the hearts of steel.

Here is the dirty man, the dirty evil man.
Who's love is his lust, And it's burning away his trust.
But no-body stops him.

Here lives a dying man, a dying bleeding man.
Who's wasted his trust, And is gone to the rust.
But no-body mourns him. (Chorus)

Here lays a broken man, a broken beaten man.
Who's life was unloved, And weighed down by his luck.
And no-body knows him. (Chorus)

Here sits a broken man, a broken beaten man.
Who's down on his luck, And feelin' kinda stuck.
But no-body helps me.

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PostSubject: Re: Hearts of Steel   Thu Aug 30, 2007 10:45 pm

Wonderful
I loved that chorus
The best of all

Chorus: No-body will ever know what it's like.
No-body will ever know how it feels.
He walks among us as the shadow in the night.
Carrying all the sins of the hearts of steel.

Roses to you
blooming

Teresa

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PostSubject: [url=http://www.servimg.com/image_preview.php?i=368&u=11   Mon Sep 03, 2007 5:53 pm

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Shadow Heart wrote:
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[center]Here sits a broken man, a broken beaten man.
Who's down on his luck, And feelin' kinda stuck.
But no-body helps him.

Here sits a lonely man, a fearful lonely man.
Who's running out of love, And feelin' out of luck.
But no-body loves him.

Chorus: No-body will ever know what it's like.
No-body will ever know how it feels.
He walks among us as the shadow in the night.
Carrying all the sins of the hearts of steel.

Here is the dirty man, the dirty evil man.
Who's love is his lust, And it's burning away his trust.
But no-body stops him.

Here lives a dying man, a dying bleeding man.
Who's wasted his trust, And is gone to the rust.
But no-body mourns him. (Chorus)

Here lays a broken man, a broken beaten man.
Who's life was unloved, And weighed down by his luck.
And no-body knows him. (Chorus)

Here sits a broken man, a broken beaten man.
Who's down on his luck, And feelin' kinda stuck.
But no-body helps me.

___________________
Notes: I had origionally intended to post my lullaby first. But I wasn't to confident in it. This is actually my 5th song give or take a few songs.
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